Lord, I love the finished product. They're so wrapped in each other, like -- emotionally? I suppose. Moreso than in the original there's a sense of focus as much as/more than *pose*. They're in that position because it's the best one they can manage on their way to other best-possible positions. I think I'm also in love with how well you manage to get across the difference between human and metahuman *strength*. Tim's power is all very *purposeful*, you know how he got it. Kon, on the other hand, seems like a normal teenager blessed with serious mojo in the gene pool. Mmm, yum.