There are a few pages that are more internal, like nightmare monsters and Buddy connecting with his power that actually look fairly decent, but most is just not. I think some could have been salvaged if a good inker had done away with the ridiculous zick-zack lines and done proper feathering, done decent crosshatching for shadows instead of these weird scribbles on the faces, made the lines more dynamic, added some more black and maybe some detail suggestions and such.
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There are a few pages that are more internal, like nightmare monsters and Buddy connecting with his power that actually look fairly decent, but most is just not. I think some could have been salvaged if a good inker had done away with the ridiculous zick-zack lines and done proper feathering, done decent crosshatching for shadows instead of these weird scribbles on the faces, made the lines more dynamic, added some more black and maybe some detail suggestions and such.