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RatCreature ([personal profile] ratcreature) wrote2003-08-10 04:30 pm
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As much as I enjoy reading Dasha's Ordinary Magic series, and its unusual take on Jim and Blair's connection, lines like these somehow still make me do a double take, even when I know it's not meant to be a physical action:

"He came closer and neatly hooked himself into my stomach with a click I could almost hear."

"I extended a finger, snared a bubble tangled in Blair above his ear, and gently tugged it out. It came away, slowly, with a popping sound Blair gave no sign of hearing."

The quotes are from Ordinary Magic Part 4: Feng Shui.

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