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RatCreature ([personal profile] ratcreature) wrote2004-05-24 11:45 pm

question about feedback etiquette for WIPs

I've just read this HP WIP (no the one with the "ma'am" all over the place btw), which hasn't been updated since October or so. Something I knew when I started reading. I really have no problem with reading WIPs, even ones with infrequent updates, those not likely to be ever finished, or abandoned ones. As those who've seen one of my (frequently lengthy) list posts on this subject on FCA-L or elsewhere probably already know. I like reading WIPs, and whether or not they get finished, as long as like what's posted I'm okay with having read whatever is shared. I usually remember enough to follow a story even if installments are months apart (I blame that on following infrequently published indie comics for years *g*), unless it's written in odd chunks with rewrites of previous sections and stuff being posted out of order. Though if the installments are posted too far apart I might forget about having followed a particular WIP, unless it's posted to my flist or I'm on an update list. Which is not to say that I don't like stories better if they're finished eventually, but the finished/unfinished status just isn't that crucial to me.

That said, I liked this WIP quite a lot (in case you're interested, it was "The Mirror of Maybe" by Midnight Blue), and considered sending feedback to the author. My first impulse was to write back that I liked it, point out a couple of the things that I enjoyed in particular, and then ask whether it's still active, because then I'd check the story from time to time. Then I remembered seeing posts how some authors find it obnoxious behavior to be asked whether they are still working on a WIP, especially if they're stalled and/or abandoned it. So I wondered whether I should maybe rather omit the part asking about future installments, or maybe not write at all. Considering that there apparently is a list for this story with over 4100 subscribers (and just how large is HP fandom anyway?) the author probably already gets enough emails nagging her about when (if?) the next installment is going to be posted. I could just join the other 1050 people on the update announcement list (the larger list is aparently for discussion too), and assume that the fact that the update list is still open implies that the WIP has not been abandoned (I assume that authors would close lists dedicated to WIPs if they truly abandon them), so that it's actually worth joining an update list.

So when you write feedback to a WIP that hasn't been updated in a while, but is not visibly abandoned, is it better to avoid the topic of potential future installments (and the related areas in feedback, like what you think will happen based on the story so far etc.) entirely? Or is it only obnoxious if the feedback doesn't just ask about it, but makes the kind of rude writing demands to continue that you sometimes see?
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[identity profile] cathexys.livejournal.com 2004-05-25 02:02 am (UTC)(link)
duh...of course you have lots of underage where you play :-) LOL i just commented on my issues with bonding fics some place else...and yes, TPM can definitely scar you on that one!!!

re Tale: i wrote a tiny little bit about it in my postmodern virgule post : Olympia M.'s Tale of the Shining Prince (http://seacouver.slashcity.net/illuferret/prince.html) is a brilliant story that completely questions and subverts the general moral outlook of the Potterverse. Without making the Malfoys nice or changing their ideological stance one bit, it *explains* them by showing their pov; it alters our Muggle-centric outlook. It also intersperses the narrative with arbitrary lists and rewritten fairy tales that somehow comment on the narrative and the characters.

Both eliade and seperis have some interesting comments on TSP from a non-HP reader's pov here (http://www.livejournal.com/users/eliade/201844.html) and here (http://www.livejournal.com/users/seperis/108109.html).

not sure how much you like the metastuff, but i adored [livejournal.com profile] pogrebin's walking shadow (http://pogrebin.arithmancy.net/WS.htm) (and here my take: the fic is much more complicated and complex with a juxtaposition of different voices/styles/etc. The central ethical problem is clearly related to writing and the writing of history--a historiographic project, so to speak. Hermione has been put on trial for letting muggles know of their existence, b/c she found it morally objectionable that muggles killed in the war were erased from everyone's memory. At the same time, the story questions Harry's position as the boy who lived, as central hero in a story that may or may not have been consciously constructed. Both ideas are about memory and storytelling as world creation.)

eh...shutting up now *g*
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[identity profile] cathexys.livejournal.com 2004-05-25 07:42 pm (UTC)(link)
oh...*small embarrassed grin* OK :-) i'll stop then. LOL!