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RatCreature ([personal profile] ratcreature) wrote2021-02-14 01:41 am
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I didn't think I was particularly sensitive to epithets...

...but this historical m/m romance novel I'm reading (Best Laid Plaids by Ella Stainton) is driving me crazy. Between both of them referring to themselves and each other sometimes by first, sometimes by last name, and also by hair color, body size, age and occasionally nationality in a dizzying, randomized cycle, there are entirely too many things to refer to just two people.

It's really frustrating, because the sex scenes are decent otherwise, the paranormal plot so far is interesting, and the characters likeable, but this makes it nearly unreadable.
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[personal profile] sealie 2021-02-16 09:22 am (UTC)(link)
As one who has also be scolded/patronised/insulted for not having a beta, I do know where you're coming from. Not having a beta doesn't mean that a story is inherently bad. I guess to a certain extent it speaks of joy, enthusiasm, rush to post and share and/or I'm doing this for fun it; shouldn't be a chore.

Fandom does chose its corners. It is nice, for example, to see Mary Sue themes being deconstructed and being seen as a positive, at the moment. I wonder where the seesaw will take it. Because you’re right there are a lot of seesaws.